October 19, 2015

  • Hole in the sun

    There's a hole in the sun
    in the dark of the day
    and the warmth we've been feeling
    is growing I'd say
    There's a rise in the ocean
    as the ice melts away
    and we'll all be swimming
    if things stay the same

    there's a storm that's rising
    with a wind blows so ill
    and changes are coming I know

    (work in progress, saved for copy write purposes, Brent)

Comments (4)

  • I think this one will be a very timely commentary on the environmental changes/destruction/evolution unless as a species we can change our ways.

  • I can totally see where you are going with this. the Artic Melt, the warm winter days, they all seem to tell us something, no?

  • @ZSA_MD: @murisopsis: you're both correct. It came by a challenge to write on a specific theme for the purpose of lyrical use.... a question... could I write lyrics to a song using certain cue's.

  • Wonderfully done. peace always

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